Blooregard Q. Kazoo

Thanks for the comments! I made a couple of alterations in line with your all's suggestions.

Heh, I liked this. At first, I wasn't sure if you were using "sunshine," "sea", etc. to describe people or not, but I finally took it to mean as the ...

Maybe you did mean to spell it as Meggin, but usually it's spelled as Meagan, Megan, or Meghan. I thought that this was written pretty well. You have good dialogue ...

The point about the unconventional writing style here does bring up another good point: you neither want it to appear forced nor pretentious, and in hindsight, I don't think you've ...

Inspirational and encouraging. I can see why you would write something like this to put you in a better mood. I think I'll bookmark it so I can read it ...